Just a moment! Before we can process your application, there are a few revisions we would like to request. Please don't panic; this just means that a few pieces of your application needed a bit more work. The revisions we'd like are:
• While the overall application is good, we'd love to see an additional weakness. The weakness of "occasionally childish" and "not always street smart" are very good, but we would either like to see more elaboration on how him being easily seasick is a personality weakness/a weakness that affects his life in a significant way, or another weakness that is more akin to a personality trait. Either is fine -- we'd just like to see a little more information about an additional personality weakness for him!
You have 48 hours to submit your revisions. After that point, your application will not be processed. Once you have corrected these minor issues, we'll process your application as soon as possible! Thank you for your understanding.
REVISIONS
Just a moment! Before we can process your application, there are a few revisions we would like to request. Please don't panic; this just means that a few pieces of your application needed a bit more work. The revisions we'd like are:You have 48 hours to submit your revisions. After that point, your application will not be processed. Once you have corrected these minor issues, we'll process your application as soon as possible! Thank you for your understanding.